Poem, proposing your love and life to a girl

poem proposing your love to a girl

I lost your track many times
Now even such thought is lethal,
That time made me realize
That you are nothing but ethereal

With a beautiful soul,
Golden values in your heart,
You are a girl of integrity
And prettiest on this behalf.

The face of a naughty child,
Wearing the purest smile;
Oh girl you rule my heart,
From a distance of a hundred miles.

Oh my bliss
Oh my little star,
This is the day
And I want to make it large

I need not to announce
I need not to declare;
I just need to confess
And I need to share.

Oh my pearl
Oh my charm
Love brought the courage to me
And I have to ask;

I have to ask,
If you will with me,
Till the eternity ends
To the day my breath lasts.

PS: This proposal has never been tried, try something better at your own ;) 

Its her turn !!

I said:

I saw you,
I fell in love;
I thought of you, both night and day,
My mind just couldn't seem to get away;
I thought am I right or am I wrong,
This thing is happening to me from a way too long;
But now i really think it will last,
And with a yes from you we will live a better part … ;
May this better part last forever,
I know both of us will add our different pleasant flavor;
may this be as smooth, as light, as shiny, like a bubble,
and I believe we would make a beautiful couple.

Her turn:

I do believe you and admit your love,
But as far as I know you love yourself much;
If you love me more than yourself,
Then yes I will love you more than anyone else;

I said:

I believe that I love you more than I love myself,
But the questions this mind is asking has left me clueless,
It says,
"If she loves you more than you love yourself, then why she is coming to you?
Doesn't she know that the day you will realize someone loving you more than yourself given that you love her more than yourself then I will have to die?
Yes she wants me to die.
And this is why I am telling you that she is telling you a lie."
So, finally I have to return,
Now I know the truth and I can't love a person who doesn't love me in turn.

Her turn: ……………………………………………………………………

i wish i could

I saw a girl;

Beautiful, shiny, lavishing like a pearl;

She was bright like the moon,

Took my painful mind away with her like a boon;

Her presence and my feelings were yet to believe,

Cutting all the voices and listening to her unheard words was such a relieve;

I know she was only visible to me,

Otherwise the world would have gone crazy;

My mind told me that it's not the right time to judge,

So I couldn't confess to me that it was love;

But the feelings were so authoritative,

My mind said those merciful word again, “you don’t want to do it”;

My mind refrained again,

And I left the place wishing not to see her ever again;

If there is a field beyond the right and the wrong,

I wish to create her again and walk along.