Jul 19, 2010

KYA SACH MUCH MEHANGI HAIN KHUSHIYAN

main sochoon kabhi akele main
jeevan k rele-pele main
kya sachmuch mehangi hain khushiyan?
ya maang hamari jyada hai.

har subah wahi munbhavan hai jo jeevan lekar atee hai,
kya rang chandni ka badla jo mun ko sheetal karti hai?
kya aaj hawa naraz huee,phoolon ne khilna chod diya?
ya kya nadiyon ne jharno ne masti main behna chod diya?
panchi ab pahle jaisa chu-chu ka shor nahin karte,
ya badal aaj shararat se barish is ore nahin karte?

jab koi chota bacha,yun hi dekhe aur muskaye
koi apna ya gair koi,asheerwad ek de jaye
choti si kisi zaroorat ko poora karna asan bane
kyun na bemani si ye baatain,khushiyon ka saman bane!

jo pyara ho wo pass rahe
'kuch acha hoga' ye aas rahe
koi wazah mile na rone ko
karan kum hai kush hone ko??

kya hai khushiyon ki paribhasha
kyun itni mushkil wo bhasha
fir kyun koi ye kehta hai
chota sa dil choti asha!!

kya paimana hai khushiyon ka
haan! itna mile to kafi hai
thoda kum ho to mafi hai
na mile to nainsaafi hai!!

ye prashn kathin inke uttar,jane koi kab layega
khushiyon ki ghum ki ulat-fer,ye jeevan chalta jayega!

main sochoon kabhi akele main........

ruchi rawat
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17 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 19, 2010 at 2:55 PM

    Sahiii main yaar tum toh kaafi talented nikle galat jagah aa gaye tum.............tumhe toh kanhi achhi jagah professor hona chahiye tha....itna sochte kaise ho????/

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  2. ruchi rawatJuly 19, 2010 at 7:36 PM

    shukriya deepak ji par main jahan hoon mujhe bilkul afsos nahin hai:)ye jagah bhi bahut achi hai haan professor nahin hoon ye sach hai.ek baar fir waqt nakal kar padne k liye bahut bahut shukriya

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  3. tushar sharmaJuly 19, 2010 at 8:50 PM

    hehe .. ruchi .. actually he's talking abt me .. he thought that it's my creation .. i rejected a offer of asst. professor .. hehe ..

    this is something i call brilliant .. u know how seldom i praise anyone's writing .. but this one is somethin i really admire .. thanks for writing and sharing it ..

    thanks for writing .. :) .. keep writing :)

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  4. ruchi rawatJuly 19, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    oops...sorry for that.....:)and thanx to u to give me such a praise...thanx

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  5. Ruhi DixitJuly 20, 2010 at 1:09 AM

    Hey Ruchi...........
    wonderful poetry......!!!!!!!!!!!
    keep writing...........

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  6. AnonymousJuly 20, 2010 at 12:46 PM

    not much into reading poetry...but read it as u insisted :p
    just kidding !!!!
    but that was worth it :)
    true feelings put forward very beautifully.will look forward to more in future.
    All the best :)

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  7. UnknownJuly 21, 2010 at 10:22 AM

    oh wow mam, g8 work , was not aware that u r such a good writer, nice thought, lagta hai mausam asar dikha raha hai aise poetry likhne ke liye, keep it up , cheers

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  8. ArvindJuly 21, 2010 at 10:19 PM

    @ruchi maa'm: i think this is your 2nd or 3rd poem i am reading. all were fine...this too was no exception. Though i am nt in a position to suggest u smthng but i will b on cloud 9 if this will b in "hindi fonts". i mean a fine heart touching lines, lyrics in hindi but spelled in english...
    rest were fine as u cn c by all other comments.
    keep writing..you r doing a fine job...

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  9. ArvindJuly 21, 2010 at 10:19 PM

    @ruchi maa'm: i think this is your 2nd or 3rd poem i am reading. all were fine...this too was no exception. Though i am nt in a position to suggest u smthng but i will b on cloud 9 if this will b in "hindi fonts". i mean a fine heart touching lines, lyrics in hindi but spelled in english...
    rest were fine as u cn c by all other comments.
    keep writing..you r doing a fine job...

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  10. ruchi rawatJuly 22, 2010 at 10:57 AM

    thanx everyone for appreciating.your comments means a lot.shukriya

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  11. ruchi rawatJuly 22, 2010 at 11:02 AM

    @arvind thank u for your honest comments.and you are absolutely in position to suggest.i also want to write hindi in hindi and i will start doing it very soon.thank u for giving youe valuble time to read and paste your comment.keep reading...

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  12. sanen k singhJuly 29, 2010 at 1:54 PM

    ruchi dd bahut khoob , jindgi ko itne paas se batane ke liye sukriya, main sochu akele me , is line par ek line yaad aati hai '' main sochta hu akele me ki akela kyun hu, wo bheed bhi mere sath hai, magar jab bhi sath hoti hai tanhai kyun rahti hai aaspas , kal tum bhi to apne he the magar aaj badal kaise gaye riste nate , main sochta hu akele me'' dd bahut achha likha hai aapne .

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  13. UnknownJuly 29, 2010 at 6:31 PM

    Ruchi Di,
    I knew it from my childhood that you a intellectual person. Brilliant work, awesome... I just cannot stop myself appreciating you again and again. I am really proud of you.....
    wow! such a nice poem....touched my heart.....and I am bound to think that" kya sach main khushiyan itani mehangi hain?"
    I guess no..........
    love and keep writing.........

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  14. ruchi rawatJuly 29, 2010 at 8:07 PM

    thank u everyone..thanku so very much for reading and appreciating my work.it means a lot to me.

    @mala thank u mala!a word of appreciation from near and dear once makes a difference for sure.love u

    @ sanen..shukriya bhai.aap jaise hindi k jaankaar se tareef pana sachmuch mayne rakhta hai.thanx

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  15. AnonymousJuly 29, 2010 at 9:57 PM

    Pura padha nahin but, NICE :)
    I'm a NINJAA :P

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  16. AnonymousJuly 31, 2010 at 2:55 PM

    Do what you want cuz a pirate is free
    YOU ARE A PIRATE :D

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  17. ruchi rawatJuly 31, 2010 at 3:38 PM

    this anonymous is my daughter:) dont take her seriously...:))

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