And have seen your work;
I am your growing up child,
And I am receiving your pleasant perks.
Thanks for the care you took during my childhood,
Our foe gave made me suffer;
But I carried on with the strength you gave,
This has made me tougher.
You love me the same way,
I do the love to you;
I know my responsibilities well,
And I will live them up to.
Worshiping you is not the key,
Neither is the praying;
Helping you in your motive is the one,
What everyone must be doing.
Give me some more strength,
I want to work upon foe with a sword;
I need you to help me lord.
Just give me the strength to go,
Just give me the strength to follow;
We will win on the day,
When every person will become our fellow.
Thank you lord.
dats the spirit....!!! :)
ReplyDeletestrange!!!whtz wrong wid u...:)
ReplyDelete@Anonymous .. thanks for finding it worth reading ... and i will pray to god that this spirit never end ..
ReplyDelete@ruchi ... It may be wrong but it feels so right :) .. regarding this case, it wont be ever wrong again .. this believe is firm ... firm like my lord .. :) ..
thanks for commenting and keep reading
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ReplyDeletehmm..gud 1.....
ReplyDeleteExcellent....... going places!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehey its good that u r exploring spritual world :) loved the line "WE will win one day"...this "WE" is really great..i have only heard people say "Oh God! help ME to win" :) ..loved the poem as always
ReplyDelete@rinki ... thanks ..
ReplyDelete@isha ... sharp observation ..
although i am seeking his help ... but i m not the common fragile man who knowingly throw their burden on the god but i m one of his followers who will help him in helping the others and making this world a better place ...
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ReplyDeletehmmm....may everyone find the bliss....dnt know abt everyone ..but you got the bliss...a good poem...i started njoying it but soon it was over...it should be a little more lengthy because when it was making sense it was over...i will expect little more depth next time....but a good one...
ReplyDeleteAmazing :) bhai why didn't i see this earliar...:) u r wat u say the strong believer of God Almighty...and the best way to offer your love for GOd is showing your dedication in your work...coz hard work is the real prayer...which u do and am sure ur heights to reach ur desti is getting closer :) i pray again that may it get more close soon that the next step u take is direct on ur successful desti
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