Feb 14, 2010

Oh yes ... that's peculiar but true !!



Oh yes I was in love,
with those brown eyes under the spectacle,
with those cheeks with the smoothness of marble,
with those pink lips wearing the joy of river,
with that crafted nose too slender,
with those hairs having a hint of curl,
with that walk which seemed to me like a twirl
I was in love with a girl,
who was an idol of shyness,
who did the love which she couldn’t confess
for whom expressing love was a boundary not to transgress
whose single thought is enough to obsess
for whom I would have died to caress
oh yes, I was in love with a girl who could have made my life with a yes.

7 comments:

  1. Rhyme is really commendable.Girl's external beauty is clearly visible in dis poem.When i was reading this i felt like dreaming with open eyes but i doubt such a girl can be found in kalyug(idol of shyness)..:):)

    Don't worry you'll surelly get a girl of your dream...heyy just wait there is no need to be so happy i m not talking about this era but just talking about the next...LOLZZ

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  2. beautifull words.beautifull poetry.beautifully discribed a really beautifull girl.idle of shyness..hmm..mushkil hai but nothing is impossible u see:)gud going...and manisha is looking so very pretty...but where r the specs?

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  3. @ rinki .. bacche .. i have seen such girl and this one was once there in my life .. i mean she is a human ... but she will never read this poem ..


    @ruchi ... she was just like manisha koyerala i swear dost ...

    thank u so much for ur generous comments ... both of u :)

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  4. oh really!!!!!!!!!!there is no need to swear ..i kno u r really such a big liar nywayzz u must be thankful...after all i gave so generously of my time(he he)....oh no!!!yahan pe bhe bacche bol diya:(....such a shameless u r!!!!!!!!!!

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  5. beautiful poetry, thought and description of the perfect girl who is like the true pearl in your life, i am sure she is someone very special for you bhai who has not yet come into thy life, i guess she is as u told a shy idol, will take her time and come into thy life..don't worry after all upar waley ne tere liye koi jodidaar banai hai zaroor the miss right ur looking for will come oneday believe me, forget the bad past and bad people...dey r not the worth to think of them again....
    am going thru ur blog to look into the treasures of articles and poems written by u God bhai tu kinna accha writer hai sacchi mucchi :) mainey yeh sab pehle dekhey hi nahi Hawwwwww :(

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  6. oh yaar ...u r awesomm....its amazing ....u really respect woman a lot :) v nice poem again

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  7. @anonymous ... thanks for your generous comment ... don't judge a book with its cover and a person from his/her blog post

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